December 02, 2011

austinkleon:

Without “lightly,” we would be having breakfast at Tiffany with Holly Go. Without “darkly,” we would not know how we see through a glass. Without “merrily,” we would row, row, row a boat down a stream and think it a nightmare. We still wouldn’t give a damn, just as Rhett Butler didn’t in Margaret Mitchell’s original Gone With the Wind, but without the addition of “frankly” we wouldn’t have one of the top movie quotes of all time.

The Great Gatsby is littered with them…

Agreed!  Lay off the adverbs!

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August 11, 2010
dailywritingexercise:

We all know that too many adjectives are evil. Today’s exercise is to remove these vicious appendages from our writing. Write for ten minutes without using an adjective.
NB. An adjective modifies a noun or pronoun, so words like quick, new, good, bright are all out, as well as most words ending in -ly.
Photo via flickr from Procsilas

Um, yeah, I commit this sin regularly…

dailywritingexercise:

We all know that too many adjectives are evil. Today’s exercise is to remove these vicious appendages from our writing. Write for ten minutes without using an adjective.

NB. An adjective modifies a noun or pronoun, so words like quick, new, good, bright are all out, as well as most words ending in -ly.

Photo via flickr from Procsilas

Um, yeah, I commit this sin regularly…